Munpreet, you begin to show an awareness of layout and include some relevant conventions on your front cover. You need to consider your masthead - it needs to be bigger and you also need to reconsider your colours as the masthead is black and so is the background so it doesn't stand out enough. Move the logo up to the top so it doesn't sit mid air. I'm not sure the blue strap line about stress is visible enough in the blue. It needs to be darker and you may need to reconsider your typography so it suggests stress maybe? The images at the bottom seem a little added on and it's difficult to see what they relate to. The strap lines are all together and blocked at the bottom of the page. Conventionally, strap lines tend to run down the side of the page. Look again at the examples you analysed and see how you can use the conventions identified here. There is also a typo - timetable not timtable!
Munpreet, you begin to show an awareness of layout and include some relevant conventions on your front cover.
ReplyDeleteYou need to consider your masthead - it needs to be bigger and you also need to reconsider your colours as the masthead is black and so is the background so it doesn't stand out enough.
Move the logo up to the top so it doesn't sit mid air.
I'm not sure the blue strap line about stress is visible enough in the blue. It needs to be darker and you may need to reconsider your typography so it suggests stress maybe?
The images at the bottom seem a little added on and it's difficult to see what they relate to.
The strap lines are all together and blocked at the bottom of the page. Conventionally, strap lines tend to run down the side of the page. Look again at the examples you analysed and see how you can use the conventions identified here.
There is also a typo - timetable not timtable!