I think you probably need more than one artist. Pop contents pages tend to be busy with lots of different images - you have 3 images of the same artist so it's not giving the impression that there are a range of different articles in the magazine. The mast head needs to be bigger. Page numbers need to be first before the heading. The twitter information needs to be at the bottom of the page. Does your research show that the image of the front cover is used on the contents page? You need to proof read your writing more carefully.
I think you probably need more than one artist. Pop contents pages tend to be busy with lots of different images - you have 3 images of the same artist so it's not giving the impression that there are a range of different articles in the magazine.
ReplyDeleteThe mast head needs to be bigger.
Page numbers need to be first before the heading.
The twitter information needs to be at the bottom of the page.
Does your research show that the image of the front cover is used on the contents page?
You need to proof read your writing more carefully.