You could do with a title and an introduction, which introduces the artist so it clear who the article is about - most articles have this. You may need to take out some of your content to make room for this. You need a full stop at the end of the quote 'I want to be a good influence...' Be careful to make sure that your questions aren't longer than your answers! You need to insert page numbers and make sure you give it one last proof read; there are some typos.
You could do with a title and an introduction, which introduces the artist so it clear who the article is about - most articles have this.
ReplyDeleteYou may need to take out some of your content to make room for this.
You need a full stop at the end of the quote 'I want to be a good influence...'
Be careful to make sure that your questions aren't longer than your answers!
You need to insert page numbers and make sure you give it one last proof read; there are some typos.