I think the main anchorage is too long. Reduce it to Exclusive Interview with Mae. The strap lines need aligning on one side so they are straight. I also think you need to reduce the size of the advertisement at the bottom - it's too big - maybe take out 'More information inside'. I feel the masthead needs to be a bit darker - a bit more heavy.
I think the main anchorage is too long. Reduce it to Exclusive Interview with Mae.
ReplyDeleteThe strap lines need aligning on one side so they are straight.
I also think you need to reduce the size of the advertisement at the bottom - it's too big - maybe take out 'More information inside'.
I feel the masthead needs to be a bit darker - a bit more heavy.