WWW: - Attempts to create a unique deign format - Some consistent use of colour
EBI: - Upload this page as an image rather than as a link - Your contents page looks very different to your front cover - although you have attempted to create a different design, the house style is very different. Amend the design so that it matches a similar format and colour to your front cover - Why is there a space that states 'front cover'? Is this for an image of the font cover or the masthead name? This looks incomplete - The page numbers do not follow a chronological order on the page, you need to ensure that page numbers are put in order so that they are easy to find - The slanting of the text makes it hard to read and follow; amend your arrangements of them. - Your image needs to link to your DPS feature which is not clearly linked within the contents page. Consider how you can show this; could the DPS caption and page number be placed upon the image? Next to the image? Can there be an arrow to link them and shadow used behind the text?
WWW:
ReplyDelete- Attempts to create a unique deign format
- Some consistent use of colour
EBI:
- Upload this page as an image rather than as a link
- Your contents page looks very different to your front cover - although you have attempted to create a different design, the house style is very different. Amend the design so that it matches a similar format and colour to your front cover
- Why is there a space that states 'front cover'? Is this for an image of the font cover or the masthead name? This looks incomplete
- The page numbers do not follow a chronological order on the page, you need to ensure that page numbers are put in order so that they are easy to find
- The slanting of the text makes it hard to read and follow; amend your arrangements of them.
- Your image needs to link to your DPS feature which is not clearly linked within the contents page. Consider how you can show this; could the DPS caption and page number be placed upon the image? Next to the image? Can there be an arrow to link them and shadow used behind the text?