WWW - Munpreet, you do examine the features used in some detail. You focus on the image and the colour and make some comment on how the reader is catered for. EBI - You need to be careful with the analysis of colour. You are making very sweeping statements about the connotations such as red signifies romance - but is is used to signify romance in this particular instance? You need to consider the use of colour more specifically - why has red been used in this particular context? What does it represent in this particular context? You might also need to consider how the articles have been arranged. Some contents pages use chronology whereas some use categories - consider this in more detail and why they have ben organised in this way. You also need to consider the language more closely - look at what kind of language is used in the article headings and the descriptors and the effects achieved - how does this inform and persuade the reader?
WWW - Munpreet, you do examine the features used in some detail. You focus on the image and the colour and make some comment on how the reader is catered for.
ReplyDeleteEBI - You need to be careful with the analysis of colour. You are making very sweeping statements about the connotations such as red signifies romance - but is is used to signify romance in this particular instance? You need to consider the use of colour more specifically - why has red been used in this particular context? What does it represent in this particular context?
You might also need to consider how the articles have been arranged. Some contents pages use chronology whereas some use categories - consider this in more detail and why they have ben organised in this way.
You also need to consider the language more closely - look at what kind of language is used in the article headings and the descriptors and the effects achieved - how does this inform and persuade the reader?